WE #14
“Ah, finally! After eleven years!” I shout out loud with
triumph. I jump off my horse and take a few steps, admiring the castle before
me – that of which took me eleven years to find.
It is a
huge castle with towers poking up all around it and a bridge leading from the
world to the entrance. Never before have I seen a castle so big and majestic.
But something else catches my interest about it.
Racing
toward it, as if ready to engulf it, is an enormous gray cloud. It sends a
chill down my spine, making me shiver and my armor to clang. How sinister…
“So
this is it…” I mutter to myself. This is the castle, the home, of the wicked
queen.
I had heard stories as a boy about
this queen. She is said to have terrorized the entire land and its people,
forcing them into poverty and sickness. She cares nothing of others, just
herself and her precious castle. So, as a firm believer in justice, I have
vowed to find this castle and queen and take them down. If you can kill a
queen, you can kill her rule.
I jump onto my horse and ride to
the entrance. There, sitting alone on a bench, is the most beautiful maiden I
have ever seen. She wears an elegant golden dress and her hair is pinned up in
an elegant manner. As I get closer, I see that she is weeping.
I dismount my horse and make my way
to her. She looks up at me with a tear-stained face.
“My dear girl, whatever is the
matter?” I ask in a soothing tone. I do not know her, but for whatever reason,
my heart breaks for her.
“It’s the queen,” she sobs. “I was
the princess of this kingdom until she forcibly took over and made it hers. I
have tried to overthrow her, but nothing has worked thus far.” She covers her
face with her hands in despair.
I smile gently. “Well, my dear
princess, this is the day you reclaim your kingdom!”
She uncovers her face and looks up
at me once more, her face alighted with the rays of hope. She melts my heart
and for a moment, I consider stealing a kiss. No, I think, I shall save
that for later.
I take her hand and help her onto
my horse, hopping on after her. We ride into the castle, knocking 2 guards
aside. An army of about 15 soldiers come running at us and I jump off the horse
and charge into battle.
I have killed 7 of the soldiers
when I feel a cold blade on my neck from behind. I parry the blade with my
sword and quickly spin around to face my opponent. My eyes open wide with
shock.
The princess!
She takes advantage of my momentary
hesitance and knocks my sword out of my hand, sending it skittering across the
marble floor. Before I can recover to retrieve it, she pushes me onto the
ground and pins me beneath her with her knees, resting the edge of her sword
against my throat.
The princess laughs, an evil
cackling laugh that does not suit her appearance at all. “Do you really think I’m
that stupid?”
I give her a confused look.
“I know who you are! You are
Jonathan Pearson and my sworn enemy. You have vowed for the past eleven years
to find me and kill me.”
Once again, I am taken aback with
shock. “Th-the queen?”
She cackles again. “Queen Boadicea,
at your service. Or is it you at mine?”
“But you’re…young,” I manage to say.
“Ah, how observant of you! Do you
like it? I had the help of a magic potion, you see. In this form, I can make
anyone pity me, and therefore trick them into anything I wish.”
“Is there a princess? A rightful
ruler for this kingdom?” I raise my voice defiantly.
“Oh yes, and she is safe and sound…in
her grave!” The queen cackles again and I take this opportunity to throw her
off me, disarm her, and pin her underneath me, resting her blade against her
own throat.
The soldiers rush forward to make
an attempt to save her. “Don’t move!” I shout. “Or your precious queen will
never again see the light of day!”
They stop in their tracks and watch
helplessly.
I turn to the queen. “Now tell me,
where is the princess?”
“I told you already,” the queen
snarls.
“You’re bluffing!” Of course, I don’t
know this, but what do I have to lose? “Tell me!” I press the blade harder
against her throat.
She cackles, but it sounds a bit
strangled. “You’re not going to kill me.”
“Sorry, Your Majesty, but you’re
wrong. I don’t have mercy for people like you.” I swing the blade and chop her
head clean off.
I quickly rise to my feet, bloody
blade raised, ready to face the soldiers, but they all look dazed, as if
awakened from a dream.
One of the soldiers, a rather
elderly chap, quickly recovers and bows to me. “Oliver, at your service! You
have broken the spell! Bless you!”
“Spell?” I hesitantly lower my
sword.
“The queen had us placed under a
spell that made us follow her orders. Like robots, we were! By killing her, you
have saved us all!”
The other soldiers bow to me in
gratitude.
I figure introductions can wait and
get to the more important matter at hand. “Is there a princess here, a rightful
ruler of this kingdom?”
“Yes,” Oliver answers. “She was
placed under a spell, too.”
“What kind of spell?”
“A sleeping spell. She will only
awaken by the kiss of ‘The One’.”
“’The One’?”
“The man who kills the queen and
saves the kingdom. He will awaken the princess and they will become King and
Queen.”
Well,
well, well, I think to myself, killing
an evil queen, saving a kingdom, getting married, and becoming king all in one
day! Definitely more than I bargained for!
“Where is she?” I demand.
Oliver points to a nearby
staircase. Without hesitation, I make my way up the staircase and come to a big
oak door at the top. I push it open and find a beautiful sleeping girl upon a
white linen bed. The black velvet material of her dress flows around her,
giving her an eerie, but beautiful appearance. Her brown hair has been
carefully arranged around her, little flowers placed in the curls here and
there.
I walk over to her, sit on the side
of the bed, and lean over to kiss her lips.
Immediately, her dress changes from
black to white and her eyelids flutter and open, revealing big, beautiful blue
eyes. She smiles softly at me and opens her mouth to speak.
“Welcome home, my husband and king.”

I must say that I really enjoyed this. I loved the chivalry of the prince, and the whole princess turned evil queen twist was quite intriguing. My one criticism would be to make the scene shifts less abrupt. Thee were times, when they went from horseback, instantly to castle, without much transition. This may slightly confuse some readers. However, over all, I really enjoyed this. The whole dialogue of the prince is quite fun, and I loved the ending.
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