The cost was
so high.
The smell of
burning flesh wafted over him and he could hear the carrion crows calling
already. They smell it too, he
thought, and dropped to his knees.
His thick,
dented armor had withstood countless attempts upon his life. His sword, Cathula, had been strong, his bow sure and steady. All
that had tried to slay him lay dead now, scattered with the countless other
bodies across the battlefield. Not one had been able to find a weakness in his
defense. Farmers and townspeople were no match for battle-hardened men.
“Borus!” One
of his brothers called out. He looked up, the eye holes in his helmet barely
big enough to allow him to see. When he did spy the figure atop the distant
knoll, he raised his bow. Darrun raised his spear in response, his white teeth
flashing within the dirt covering his face.
I am whole, I survived, we are victorious, their actions spoke across the
distance, over a sea of burning, bleeding, moaning corpses. It was good to be
alive where so many were dead, to have the honor of serving his commander and
taking the river front town for their own. But he had been trained to fight
against men, against other soldiers. Not against bakers and smiths and
children.
Yes, we are victorious, my friend. Borus looked out over the strewn
death surrounding him. A gurgling groan came from a body that lay five feet away.
Borus leaned forward and with the tip of his long bow, pried the leather helmet
off the head of a dying young boy. His blonde hair was matted with blood,
half his face was crushed, and where his mouth used to be, there was only a mush
of teeth and bleeding flesh. Though unconscious, his body was still trying to
breath in through the catastrophe that was his face.
Victorious…
He pulled
his sword from its scabbard and hefted it above the neck of the fallen boy. In
his mind he spoke a word of prayer before he let the blade fall, ending the
torment. He could not have been any
older than twelve springs.
…But at what cost?

Oh man! I believe this story really reveals the heart and soul of every battle. There is always a victor in the end, but soo many lives are taken to achieve this goal. Is being victorious worth the cost of the innocent lives sacrificed? Wow, loved this, Tomara! You definitely have a way with words :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Chelsea, I also admire the similarities between our pieces this week. To me, this would be the hardest thing as a soldier to reconcile, especially back in the earliest times of warfare. I'm so glad this made an impression-- it's very short for me, as you know, lol! But I felt it said what I wanted it to say...
ReplyDeleteDefinitely! And lol, sometimes shorter is better ;) if you have good quality, you don't need much quantity :)
ReplyDeleteNice way of putting that, I totally agree!:)
DeleteVery gripping!:) Nice way of showing what is going on in the reader's mind:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Mikala! This one was interesting to write... took a while to hear his voice.
DeleteExcellent, beyond all reasoning good! Amazing definitely, keep up the greatness!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Joe! :-D You do the same...
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